How Old Is Old
I think old is fifty years old. When I think of old I think of grey hair, slow moving, crooked back and wrinkles. Hear are some reasons why I think that fifty is old.
By the time someone reaches the age of fifty, he/she usually has grey hair. At the age of fifty people usually start to loose a lot of the their athletic abilities. When this happens, he/she will have trouble getting enough exercise.
These are my thoughts about how old, old is, and these are my reasons. Everyone can have their own opinions on this topic.
You have a good introduction and conclusion. The body of your essay was to have 3 paragraphs to back up your opinion. (3)
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