My first reason is they aren't as active. By that I mean they may not move around as well as they used to. They may need to use a walker or a cane. They may even need to use a wheelchair. Their bones could be getting weaker, and bringing them to that extent.
My second reason is they know a lot more. They have been around longer and have learned a lot than I have. They may have had many experiences to learn new things. (E.g New languages)
My third reason is they have experienced a lot more. They have had a lot more chances to go on a cruise or to another country. They may have also had a different kind of job experience.
These are my reasons why I think 70 is old. But with a healthy diet you could live to be 90.
My second reason is they know a lot more. They have been around longer and have learned a lot than I have. They may have had many experiences to learn new things. (E.g New languages)
My third reason is they have experienced a lot more. They have had a lot more chances to go on a cruise or to another country. They may have also had a different kind of job experience.
These are my reasons why I think 70 is old. But with a healthy diet you could live to be 90.
Good work. I like how you have organized your writing and how clear your writing is. One suggestion would be to focus on the age of 70 and not to mention the age of 90 in your conclusion. Remember you are trying to convince people 70 is old not 90. (1)
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