I think 75 is old. I pick 75 for three different reasons.
When people are 75 they start to lose their memory. They go on lots of trips to different places and old people know more stuff. Their bones become weaker and they can't walk as fast. They may even have to go to an old peoples home and have help eating and getting out of bed. They might even have to have a walker, cane, or a scooter.
When their at this age. They may be able to do stuff. They won't be able to go for a run every morning and they they won't be able to play sports. They might have to get hearing aids or maybe glasses.
They get old and retire and get a pention plan. They start to get alsimers. They forget their supposed to do when you tell them something. They start to forget where they live.
These are some reasons why I picked 75. This may not be an old age for everyone!
I like how you have attempted an introduction and conclusion. Remember each paragraph should be about one topic. If you are talking about health issues in a paragraph the whole paragraph should be about health issues. Also be sure to proofread. (3)
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