Some people will agree and some people will disagree with my opinion but coming from my mind i think that 70 years old is old. Here are some reasons why i think 70 years old in an old age.
When your 70 you can't do as many things as you did when you were about 30 you cant do your morning walks everyday. But for some people where they are 70 the don't look 70 and they are in shape still and can still do what they use to do. Its all about staying active and healthy.
Once you get to the age of 70 for some people they will lose everything. Some cant remember anything at all.
When you are 70 most people will be retired from their jobs. Some people will be living in their own homes and some people will be living in an old folks home. Once you get to that age you start to get wrinkles and get Grey hair.
The older the people are they will have a lot more experience then younger people our and the people that are around 70 they will know lots more of the things that we don't know.
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