I think old is 50 years of age people might not agree but that's what i think.
When people are 50 they start to lose their memory. They go on lots of trips to different places and old people know more stuff.
When your 50 your bones become weaker and they can't walk as fast. They may even have to go to an old peoples home and have help eating and getting out of bed. They might even have to have a wheel chair a cane or a electric scooters.
When you are 50 you'll have health care problems and not doing the stuff you were doing when you were younger. So you can't do as much. or if you still drive a car you will probably go very very very very slow. So you can't do as much when you are older.
When you turn 50 lot's of the time your hearing starts to go. This makes it harder for people to communicate with you lot's of people need a hearing aid. Lot's of people over the age of 50 wear hearing aids.
so that's why I think 50 is old.
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