I think 80 is old. These are my reason why i think 80 is old.
When you are "old" your appearance changes. Your hair starts to change color, your get wrinkles, and your back hunches. There are many changes in appearance when your get "old". Old age may just be getting gray hair, or not being as mobile as you used to be. But its much more than that.
When you are "old" your appearance changes. Your hair starts to change color, your get wrinkles, and your back hunches. There are many changes in appearance when your get "old". Old age may just be getting gray hair, or not being as mobile as you used to be. But its much more than that.
Getting old isn't always always a bad thing. When you age you gain experience. Another reason why i think 80 is old because, you have lived through many different experiences, gained knowledge and have seen many different things. When you are 80 you probably have grand kids, and aren't as mobile as you used to be. You may use a walker or cane to get around. This is because your bones are getting weaker and more fragile.
To elders heath problems could just be another pill to take or another doctor to see. But they are also at a big risk of dying from the common cold. Their bodies aren't strong enough to fight against the germs and bacteria. There are many different diseases and phobias they get and cant fight off. Example Cancer and Alzheimer's.
These are my three reasons why i think 80 is old.
Good effort. Remember that each of your paragraphs should be about one particular topic. Your third paragraph tends to skip around. Also be sure to proofread. (2)
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