How Old is Old?
I think that when people reach 87 years old that is old. Theses are three reasons why I think this.
When
people reach 87 years old they have had alot of experiences and they
know lots. My grandma and grandpa like to grow the garden for the
family.
They have had experiences to cook for the family. Grandma loves to bake for the large family.
When you get old you get your license taken away from you. My grandma can
t
paralletl park but my grandma can do straight parking. My grandma can
cook supper for the large family. My grandma loves when the great
grand kids can have a sleepover.
Grandma and Grandpa like to come
to the birthday parties for the great grand kids. They give you money
for you birthday. Grandma and Grandpa like to play cards and board
games with the grand kids. They alway like to go for walks everyday.
I hope that when I'm 87 years old I can do the things that my grandma and grandpa like to do.
Good work. I like how you have an introduction, 3 supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion. For the most part your writing is much clearer. (3)
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