I think 71 is an old age. these are my 3 reasons.
When some people reach the age of 71 they have had a lot of experience in the world and they know a lot of stuff. If you are this age you may have sore legs and be less mobile. You might need a cane, a walker or even a scooter.
It might take you longer to do thing like going down the stairs or getting into the car. you might have to get someone to cook and clean for you. You won't be as active as you want to be.
I think 71 is old because you can't do as much as you want to do. you may feel like your a botherto the people around you because of your slowness.
These are some of the reasons why I think 71 is old.
I like how you have an introduction, 3 supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion. Remember that a paragraph talks about one topic only. If you start off talking about health issues the whole paragraph should be about health issues. (3)
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